Here, I provide an introduction to my research paper and links to the relevant blog posts that served as part of my writing process.
After watching Where to Invade Next by Michael Moore, we got the ideas that he mentioned to argue for America. Please check Summary of Where to Invade Next for the details. Among the facts he provided, I chose 'Should the American educational system follow Finland’s educational system?' topic for my research paper. Finland's kids are ahead from the rest of the world due to their recess time, and no 'Standardized tests.' The question comes to our mind how their system got better and why they use them and become ahead of America. Thus, I provided them in my research paper.
At first, I got the dilemma whether to choose between free college and educational system. But, finally, i found out that educational system looked more interesting for me to work on. After i got the topic, i had to search about the topics for the blog post, 'Annotated Bibliography'. I had no idea until the information literacy session. After attending that, I came to know how to use the library data base and distinguish between the primary and secondary sources. I gathered the information of the topic and write them by quoting, summarizing and paraphrasing. On the first day of writing of the research paper, I faced the difficulty to write the thesis statement and topic sentence. I don't really know about how to write them, but i tried my best. On the second day, I started the second paragraph. By doing so, i finished my research paper on the forth day. To be honest, I am not that satisfied for my first draft. However, I will revise again and again to result a good paper.
* Draft#2(Should American Educational System Should Follow Finland's Educational System?)
* Draft #1 (Should American Educational System Should Follow Finland's Educational System?)
After watching Where to Invade Next by Michael Moore, we got the ideas that he mentioned to argue for America. Please check Summary of Where to Invade Next for the details. Among the facts he provided, I chose 'Should the American educational system follow Finland’s educational system?' topic for my research paper. Finland's kids are ahead from the rest of the world due to their recess time, and no 'Standardized tests.' The question comes to our mind how their system got better and why they use them and become ahead of America. Thus, I provided them in my research paper.
At first, I got the dilemma whether to choose between free college and educational system. But, finally, i found out that educational system looked more interesting for me to work on. After i got the topic, i had to search about the topics for the blog post, 'Annotated Bibliography'. I had no idea until the information literacy session. After attending that, I came to know how to use the library data base and distinguish between the primary and secondary sources. I gathered the information of the topic and write them by quoting, summarizing and paraphrasing. On the first day of writing of the research paper, I faced the difficulty to write the thesis statement and topic sentence. I don't really know about how to write them, but i tried my best. On the second day, I started the second paragraph. By doing so, i finished my research paper on the forth day. To be honest, I am not that satisfied for my first draft. However, I will revise again and again to result a good paper.
* Draft#2(Should American Educational System Should Follow Finland's Educational System?)
* Draft #1 (Should American Educational System Should Follow Finland's Educational System?)